Leadership writing

In writing I have been learning to:

• use all basic punctuation independently
• attempt more complex punctuation (eg semicolons, colons, parentheses)

I have been especially focussing on using parentheses and commas. I have highlighted these in green where I have used them as well as other punctuation that I changed or added because it was used incorrectly or forgotten. Here is a piece of my writing that shows this.

Being goal focused is another key leadership trait . This means if you have a goal you will achieve it . Sir Edmund Hillary has also shown goal focused , he said he would do something and he did it . Sir Edmund Hillary achieved this because , he put his mind to it and was goal focussed.