WALT: Write a text will persuade others to believe in our opinion.
I Know I have achieved this when:
- Introduction:stating the argument
- Persuasive words
- Persuasive Sentence starters
- Share your personal Opinion
- Each paragraph has a main point (Usually the beginning)
- Share your Personal Opinion
Pros (For) MUFTI
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Cons (Against) UNIFORM
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Intro: Do you like school uniform because I know I dont thats why I think we shouldn't wear school uniform.
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1: Children should get a chance to express themselves by wearing things that they like not what the school likes. Kids need a chance to show their full potential of what they like they can show what their like by using style in their clothing.
Idea - Our clothes at home are longing to be worn because we’re at school 5 days a week for 30 hours. We only have the weekends to wear mufti. It's annoying Mums & Dads are wasting money on mufti clothes that we hardly get to wear.
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2: Uniforms are expensive they are an average cost of $100. We have a tshirt , sweatshirt , polarfleece, tracksuit pants , shorts , colors , white , black , red and green socks , sneakers or black leathered shoes.
Uniforms get worn 5 days a week for 30 hours it's like a work uniform. Uniforms are a waste of money they are too hot. We can't play in them like we do with our mufti because they will rip and it will be a waste of money were as mufti clothes are about $5-10. If we rip mufti it's an easy replacement cheap and affordable. And Uniform is not another $50.
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3: In summer when it 30 degrees we are burning we have to wear thick clothes that make us really hot. Were as if we are wearing mufti we would be nice and cool in our cotton clothes that keep us really cool.
We get too hot. Kids feel like they are going to get heat stroke. We should be able to wear what we want to make us suit whatever the weather.
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In conclusion I strongly believe we shouldn’t wear school uniform and if you don’t well then you do not know what you are talking about.
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Do you like school uniform because I know I dont thats why I think we shouldn't wear school uniform.
I feel Children should get a chance to express themselves by wearing things that they like not what the school likes. Kids need a chance to show their full potential of what they like they can show what their like by using style in their clothing.Our clothes at home are longing to be worn because we’re at school 5 days a week for 30 hours. We only have the weekends to wear mufti. It's annoying Mums & Dads are wasting their hard earnt money on mufti clothes that we hardly get to wear.
I believe School Uniforms are expensive they are an average cost of $100. We have a tshirt , sweatshirt , polarfleece, tracksuit pants , shorts , collotes , white , black , red and green socks , sneakers or black leathered shoes. We don't wear all them anyways most days we just wear shoes, socks , shirt and polar fleece waste of money for the extra things.
Another reason is that uniforms get worn 5 days a week for 30 hours it's like a work uniform. Uniforms are a waste of money they are too hot. We can't play in them like we do with our mufti because they will rip and it will be a waste of
money were as mufti clothes are about $5-10. If we rip mufti it's an easy replacement cheap and affordable. Really parents don't want to pay another $20 -40 on a uniform which is just a waste.
I strongly think that in summer when it 30 degrees we are burning we have to wear thick clothes that make us really hot. Were as if we are wearing mufti we would be nice and cool in our cotton clothes that keep us really cool. We get too hot. Kids feel like they are going to get heat stroke. We should be able to wear what we want to make us suit whatever the weather.If your cold bring a jersey if you're hot just bring / wear cotton.
In conclusion I strongly believe we shouldn’t wear school uniform and you should feel comfortable in your clothes ready for a day of learning in the more relaxed modern learning environment.
Thanks for considering my opinion.
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