Flag Referendum Keep the Current Flag

                           Flag Referendum

IALT write a text that will persuade others.

             .New Zealand should keep the current flag.

I think that New Zealand should keep the current flag.

In my opinion I think that New Zealand should keep the current flag.

The most important reason is that we could use all the valuable money on Children's education and people who need food water and somewhere for them to live. Children's education is more important and would be better to spend it on so that all children can get a good chance at life and for a good future. People in poverty are cold homeless hungry and in need. Over 100 people die a per day.

Furthermore we are in the commonwealth and if we don't have the Union Jack on the flag people will think we quit the commonwealth and we're not going to in participate in the Commonwealth games anymore. The Union Jack can represent the cultures that live here now. We can still participate in the games but our flag might just have to be different.

My final reason is New Zealand and Australia were buddies in War so we should have a similar flag to represent us as a team and if we change the flag Australia might not be in our team if we have another war. Our flags represent us as a team.

Therefore  I strongly believe that New Zealand should keep the current flag.

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