SRL Writing Week 7

WALT plan on a hamburger and write a complete (recrafted in red pen) recount about an experience of your choice.

My next step is to make it more descriptive for the reader.

Algorithms

WALT do algorithms 

My next step is to carry numbers over to the next column. 

Reflection Post

Week 3 Term 3


I learnt how to do good recrafting by making my sentences and making them longer.

Here is an example:






BASIC                                                               RE-CRAFETED                                            

I walked down the road.        I walked slowly down the windy road.

My next step is to make my re-crafting longer and more interesting.

SRL Learning

Walt make picture and chapter summaries.

My next step is to describe what happened more.

Describing a character

WALT describe a character. My next step is to describe them more. I learnt that describing makes it more interesting for the reader.

Maths

WALT : adding a tidy number first then subtracting a small number on.
Next step : check what number I had added on first.

Here is an example.
36+27=
     +3
36+30= 66
63-3= 63

My spelling words 2/7/2015

Disappeared
We're
Tomorrow
Favourite
Lightning


The  lightning is very  loud.
My  favourite colour is blue.
Tomorrow is Thursday.
We're best friends
My friend disappeared where did she go?




WALT spell new words correctly.
My next step is to spell my words without looking at my book.
I have learnt that favourite has no e next to the v.

If I woke up with wings

Boom Crash I woke up. I had a very sore back. I ran to my Mum and Dad."What was that horrible noise" I asked. "Charlotte you have wings, big blue ones" my Mum shrieked. "I  have what?" "Yes Charlotte you do have wings" exclaimed Dad.   




Instantly I sprinted outside into the cold spooky dark night. I ran round in circles for a bit and lifted my beautiful wings up and flew up onto the roof. Suddenly there was a huge thunderous noise it was the bad-tempered bad black witch, casting spells. I went up to her. "What do you want?" she bellowed. "What are you  doing here" I replied. "Nothing end of story" she said as she stamped her foot and flew away.


"At least she is gone now" I said proudly. We all went back to our warm cuddly  beds. We all woke up in the morning and had breakfast which was scrumptious crunchy toast. When I turned 22 I lost my wings and I got really sick. I finally got better. We all lived happily ever after in our black and silver mansion. 

Book recommendation

Walt become a better reader 

So what: I learnt about the earthquakes. I recommend this his book because it is really interesting about the earthquakes and what it looked like when all the houses were all damaged and destroyed.

My next step is to become a faster reader.        

                                                                                                                            

All about space

15/6/2015       Space

Pluto is not a planet it is a dwarf planet.
Saturn has rings around it made out of dust,rocks and ice particles.
Venus is a red planet.
The moon can turn red and is nick named the blood moon.
Planet nick names:
Swift planet = Mercury
Morning star = Venus
Red planet =Mars
Blue planet =Earth
Giant planet = Jupiter
Ringed planet =Saturn
Ice giant =Uranus
Big blue planet =Neptune

Air force museum

airforcemuseum       10/6/15
Room 5 went to the air force museum.
We learnt about the ejecter seat that comes out of the plane in an emergency.
Also we learnt about thrust,pull,drag and lift.

My spelling word practice

WALT spell new words correctly.                  10/6/15
Disappeared Disappeared Disappeared Disappeared Disappeared
 The big hairy black cat disappeared
My chocolate bar has disappeared where has it gone?

Word work

WALT we are  learning to spell new words correctly.

We're we're we're we're we're 

We're playing tag do you want to play?

Reading

WALT identify text features.

  BOLD makes the text stand out.

CAPTION tells me about the picture.

PICTURES show a picture about what's happening.

Reading,writing and maths

In reading we have been reading about Force and Motion.

In writing we have been writing recounts about our fitness.

In maths my group has been using number-lines.

SpongeBob going crazy and taking over the world

One hot day in Bikini bottom,SpongeBob wanted to take over the world. So he made some Patrick robots. SpongeBob went to Patrick's house to discuss their plan. The next day they played their tricks. First they made some bombs,and blew up the Krusty Krab.KABOOM!

The next day SpongeBob and Patrick went to blow up the houses of all the neighbourhood. CRASH BANG BOOM!

The next day they warned everyone there was a tornado coming. So they told everyone to evacuate the area.

                                      To be continued!

                        

Daily 5 post

In daily 5 I have written a letter to a Anzac veteran who served in world war 2.

In reading I have read about  George Bollinger.

My new spelling word

This is my next spelling word to work on.

Reflection post

Hi This week I am proud of my breaststroke  in my swimming

Charlottes words

This is the word i am working on for daily 5

ANZAC DAY

This is a photo of my great grandad.

He was in world war 2. I learnt that they sleep in trenches that they dug.

My tiki art

I found it hard to do all the detailed patterns and teeth.The part I enjoyed the most was drawing the eyes.  :)